Here is a map of New York where the book "Twelve", of Nick McDonell, plays.The map shows the most important places and districts which are mentioned in the book.
I'm not sure, but i think you've got some grammatical mistakes, like you've got to wright in Present tense but you wrote in past tense, for example. and you also got some mistakes in wrighting like "After the cokctail party" in Chapter 39 . but nothing very important.
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Hey Beni!
Nice Idea with this map! It makes your blog "more alive"! But I like also the rest of your blog!
Bye
Lukas
Hey Beni,
I like your blog, but you have some mistakes, fly over the text, then you find them.
hey,
I'm not sure, but i think you've got some grammatical mistakes, like you've got to wright in Present tense but you wrote in past tense, for example. and you also got some mistakes in wrighting like "After the cokctail party" in Chapter 39 . but nothing very important.
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